About Me
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my blog and thank you for coming! My name is Heecheol. I was born in 2000/Oct/19 in Korea in Seoul. Right now, I'm in Kangwando GLPS camp. When I was 10 years old in Korea in Kyeongido, my family and I went to Dubai, because of my dad's business. After 1 year I came back to Korea for a summer vacation. Then we came back and we moved to another country called Saudi Arabia. The both countries were too hot, but Saudi was more hot than Dubai. After 1 year once again my family came back to Korea and my family is living in my grandma's house and I'm in Kangwando GLPS camp right now! Do you know how I came to the camp? I rode a huge green bus and it took 2 hours to go to Kangwando from Kyeongido. I got excited to go to the camp, because it was first time that I came here. But sad thing is that I miss my family a lot. Well I think it's time to say good bye now! Bye everyone! See you!~c:
Hi Hee Cheol,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing about where you have lived. It is interesting to read. Good luck at camp and I hope you keep posting!
Hi Heecheol:) I am your writing TA, Jiyoung. I enjoyed your writing! It was really interesting to know about where you have lived. Just one thing I want to mention is that I want you to try more with the organization of your writing:) Try to divide into paragraphs with the transition of the context. Writing an intro and a conclusion would alsp be great! Next time, I want to see a more organized and elaborated writing:) Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to camp! I wanted to read your first assignment "Three things I know to be true" but you didn't do it. Remember, to improve your writing you need to write and complete the assignments. Please add it to your blog and post assignments on time!
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