The poem is very good. The pictures and colors add to the effect. Keep up the great work!
Wow, a great contrast! Good :) If I were you, I would use the middle nouns lines for something else, like grass flowers insects worms.. just a very personal thought.
The poem is very good. The pictures and colors add to the effect. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteWow, a great contrast! Good :) If I were you, I would use the middle nouns lines for something else, like grass flowers insects worms.. just a very personal thought.
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